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I wanted some advice, I am new to photography, I posted an image on Photodune for sale and it was rejected because of:

  • Element or framing composition
  • Noise, exposure, lighting or saturation
  • Chromatic aberration, moiré pattern or other image quality issues

This is the photo in question.

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If your right click, view image, the hi resolution loads. –  TheBlackBenzKid Feb 11 '12 at 21:28
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I see five things wrong. Three are compositional:

  • The bowl should be centered vertically (its horizontal placement is good), with room enough to bleed the image and still have the whole bowl showing. Your margin at the top is good, but the bowl touches the bottom, is partially cut off (by about four pixels) and there's no room to print the image full-bleed. That means it has very limited editorial usefulness.

  • The counter/table should extend all the way to the bottom of the picture. Having the bowl hanging over the edge means that there's a black void at the bottom, and that's not nearly as attractive as having the granite texture extend throughout the picture. The edge of the granite is also not square with the edge of the frame, and even if you had included the blackness on purpose, it is absolutely essential that graphic elements are placed deliberately -- either keep them straight or make them leading lines.

  • Similarly, the upper chopstick just misses being a proper diagonal leading line. If it had hit the exact corner of the frame, it would have been a great element, but it just misses the mark. You have to get these things bang on, and sometimes that means creating a series of very similar images that work properly at different crops. Make yourself familiar with the proportions of full-page, page-and-a-half and double-truck layouts in trade magazines -- those proportions will make a difference to your sales.

The fourth problem is noise -- it's very noticeable in the midtones in the upper interior of the bowl. The textures everywhere else make the noise invisible, but when you have an area of flat colour (or a smooth gradient) with little or no texture, noise stands out like a sore thumb. De-noising the image isn't optional.

Finally, there are artifacts from sharpening, especially along the upper edge of the chopsticks and the upper-left edge of the bowl. That may register to some as lateral chromatic aberration, but it looks a whole lot more like an unsharp masking artifact to me -- those particular edges were already prominent, and trying to force them created a one-pixel outline.

Both of those last two can be fixed. You may not want to change the process for the entire image, but that's why we have layers and layer masks. For instance, running a noise filter over the entire image may add to the minor depth-of-field problem at the top of the noodles and make the granite look like a granite-printed laminate. So run the filter against a copy of the image on a new layer, then mask out everything except the bowl.

The same thing goes with the sharpening -- the rest of the image may need it, but you ought to mask it out where it's creating artifacts, or at least sharpen that area of the picture to a much lesser degree.

I don't see any problems with your overall exposure or saturation, by the way -- the only things clipping are specular highlights, and they're supposed to do that.

The stock market is hard, and excellence is the entry level. There's no room at all for "okay", "good enough" or even merely "really good". Real sales start at "spectacular", and that means getting absolutely everything right to begin with before you add your special sauce.

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Thank you so much. –  TheBlackBenzKid Feb 11 '12 at 21:27
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Chromatic aberration is the separation of the image into it's component colours due to the different degree of refraction each wavelength experiences when passing through a lens.

Moire is the pattern you get when two grids overlap. This is most clearly seen on TV when pinstripe jackets show the effect due to the scan lines of the TV signal.

Your image is slightly over-exposed (in the top right corner especially) and grainy, but I'm assuming that that was the effect you were looking for. There is also some colour fringing on the chopsticks too.

It could well be that you got a stock message sent when any of the problems mentioned is detected.

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"It could well be that you got a stock message sent when any of the problems mentioned is detected." True. Added some rep for your efforts. –  TheBlackBenzKid Feb 11 '12 at 21:27
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@TheBlackBenzKid - I knew I couldn't provide a critique, but I could point you at explanations for some of the terms used. –  ChrisF Feb 11 '12 at 21:31
    
Appreciated. Nonetheless –  TheBlackBenzKid Feb 11 '12 at 22:07
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Note the reasons you received are general statements and are probably sent generically for a great number of images with very little in common. That being said a good number of them apply to your image:

  • Why would you frame something like that. Look at the edge of the plate. I assume it was not moving ;) so there is no reason for it to be cut off. That is the most striking composition error.

  • The chopsticks are clearly over-exposed and possibly some parts of the bowl. Again, this should be completely evident while reviewing the image.

  • The color saturation is wildly excessive and shows an eerie unnatural glow in the red noodles. I would guess that your red channel is clipped too. If your camera has different color modes, choose something like Standard or Natural not Vivid and be carefull with increasing the saturation parameter. If you do, it should rarely be by more than one or two points.

  • Around the over-exposed area there is color fringing which falls under other image quality issues.

Always remember the words of Jay Maisel: If you are not your harshest critic, you are your own worst enemy. Finally, never submit an image anywhere for consideration if you can see any defect in it. There are always plenty you wont see because of attachment to the image.

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Thank you for comments and efforts, repped. –  TheBlackBenzKid Feb 11 '12 at 21:30
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  • Element or framing composition:

I would guess this might be because the bowl is touching the frame of the image.

  • Noise, exposure, lighting or saturation:

I think you have saturation on the chop sticks in the upper right hand corner.

  • Chromatic aberration, moire pattern:

I can't see what is wrong with the image in that regard.

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Thanks. Repped. –  TheBlackBenzKid Feb 11 '12 at 21:27
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